Note from Vic: Recently my email inbox has seen an epidemic of people who want my help with their product but don’t know how to ask me properly.
When you ask somebody for a favor - somebody you don’t know - you aren’t really asking them for a favor, you are pitching yourself. You’re not selling your product, you’re selling you.
If you don’t pitch properly guess what happens? Nothing. And nothing is the exact opposite of something.
Before I give the mic to Ludvig I want to show you one example of how not to pitch an influencer.
Subject: Yo Fat FUCK! Stop RUINING MY LIFE
Message Body:
YO Victor, why are you so hateful?Great, excuse me for my language, I had to get your attention as you are a successful entrepreneur who does not has time for regular Joe’s, neither do I and that is what I like about your website.
Would you like to check out my website, if created it using your guidelines and it can be improved more, would you give me some small advice? the url is: deleted.
you can contact me on deleted.
Have a nice day Uncle Vic,
With regards,
So and so
Now you know how not to pitch, time to learn from the master on how to pitch properly.
Enter Ludvig……
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In the past year I’ve pitched a lot of people via email, over the phone, and in person. I’ve had some success in doing this.
I’ve got a background as a phone salesman selling newspaper subscriptions.
Being a phone salesman is one of the least gratifying jobs that exist – when you don’t sell. But it’s very fun when you do sell. There’s a reason salespeople use terms like “made a killing”, because that’s what closing feels like.
Most people are very uncomfortable talking over the phone, and I was no exception when I first started. It was absolutely brutal, but from that job I took some valuable lessons that have proven useful ever since – like learning the basics of pitching.
When you pitch people there are certain things you’ll want to keep in mind. These are the things I’m going to tell you about.
Note: If you’re going to be a professional blogger you need to pay attention and learn this stuff.
Things to Think About When You Pitch
The most important principle to think about anytime you pitch is this:
Am I making it as easy as possible for the other person to say “YES” to my offer?
The second most important principle is this:
Don’t waste people’s time!
Know what you want and don’t fuck around.
Before launching into my pitch, I asked three questions: “How many of the end-uses for rayon must be covered in your campaign?”
Answer: automobile tires, furnishing fabrics, industrial products, women’s clothing, men’s clothing.
“How much money is available?”
Answer: $600,000.
“How many people must OK the advertisements?”
Answer: the twelve members of the Committee, representing twelve manufacturers.
“Ring the bell!” I said, and walked out … Too many masters, too many objectives, too little money. –David Ogilvy
Pitching via Email
When you pitch via email you should abide by the following rules if nothing else is specified:
- Keep it short and simple.
- Be clear in what you’re asking for, saying, or offering. There should be no doubts to the other person about what your intention is. State this in the subject line.
- If your pitch requires it, make your opening sentence interesting. Write it in a way that inspires curiosity to read the rest of the message.
- Refer to things you’ve done in a non-bragging and professional way. Social proof is always powerful.
The reason you want to do these things is because you will save the other person time by providing relevant and easily understandable information. This makes it easier for the other person to make a decision.
People dislike having decision anxiety, which is why they’ll like you when you do these things and make their lives easier.
Learn to Adjust the Pitch to the Situation
The agencies which are most successful in new business are those whose spokesmen show the most sensitive insight into the psychological make-up of the prospective client. Rigidity and salesmanship do not combine. –David Ogilvy
Different situations call for different pitches. No two situations are the same.
This is true not only about pitching via email, but pitching in general.
Even though it’s usually a good idea to work by certain rules of thumb, you need to be ready to drop all that and adjust your pitch if the situation requires it.
I recently met an older woman at a party. She had written one press release which she had sent to several newspapers to get publicity for her company.
None of them had accepted it.
Why didn’t they accept it?
Because she hadn’t taken the effort to adjust the pitch to each newspaper. Her press release was way too general. It wasn’t newsworthy enough – it wasn’t remarkable.
Sometimes You Need to Stick to the Rules Despite Being Told the Contrary
I recently pitched a guest post to the biggest self-development blog in the UK.
On their site it says:
“Don’t worry about writing a fancy pitch or impressing me with credentials. Life’s too short for all that malarkey :)”
Right.
So what did I do?
They say not to do a formal pitch, but that’s just so that the losers won’t be scared away.
But what does this mean to you?
It means that it’s even more important that you abide by the 4 basic rules for Email-pitching, because they already get a ton of shitty emails and proposals.
You’re competing for their attention.
As you can see, I’m making it very easy for them to say “YES” to me. I’ve provided everything. No extra work is needed on their side.
And how did it go?
I guess it actually pays to bother with “all that malarkey” and impress people with credentials after all…
(In this example it’s a guest post being pitched, but this is essentially how you’d go about pitching anything to a busy person. The fundamentals are the same.)
What Did I Do Here?
- I was to the point. There wasn’t a single unnecessary word in that email. It was an easy read. I even attached an image, told them where I got it, and how long my post was. I saved them time and energy by providing everything they needed to say “YES”.
- I resolved all possible objections they might’ve had, before they even arose. There was no need for them to ask any further questions.
- I identified with their position by saying “I understand how much mail (and pitches) you must be getting”, which, as you saw in the second image, turned out to be absolutely true.
- The message looked professional. I showed my previous writing and made it easy for them to check me out.
- I used social proof. First I mentioned that I have a fast-growing blog (this is risky, don’t do it if it’s not true), and when they check out my blog they see it’s correct. Second, I mention being a contributor to LifeHack, that’s also somewhat impressive. Third, I have written a book, that stands out too. Fourth, I tell them the number of comments on the post and that I was the first person to do a guest post at Bold and Determined.
These things are necessary to use in order to grab the attention of someone who is very busy.
Word of caution:
You do want to make use of these things, but you don’t want to come off as braggadocious. If you have to extend the email just to brag, don’t.
Remember, brevity is of the essence. Short and succinct = powerful and persuasive.
If you want to immerse yourself in a good case study, read Bold and Determined for an entire day and look only at Vic’s comment answers. I’ve done it myself.
Useful Programs
I’ve included a couple of the helpful programs that I frequently use in contacting people:
- The Alexa Toolbar to get a gist of how popular a site is and see if it’s worth your time pitching them.
- The WiseStamp email signature to look more professional. You can include your site, social media profiles and a picture of yourself. Personally I think the picture is important because people connect with people – not faceless entities.
- Boomerang for Gmail. This program helps you schedule emails and follow up on interactions if you use Gmail.
- Windows OneNote or EverNote for keeping a digital commonplace. This is where you will collect useful information such as URLs, keep it in one place, and easily find it later. These two programs are great for building your contact list, which we’ll get to shortly.
And don’t worry, these programs are all completely free. The only exception is OneNote. It costs you money if you’re not a windows user.
Start Building Your Contact List NOW
If you keep a digital commonplace –which you need to start doing if you aren’t already – you will create separate tabs inside of it entitled “CONTACT”, “GUEST POST SUBMISSIONS”, “PITCHES”, and so on.
Starting now, every time you see a website/blog/company/person that you find interesting and would like to pitch or get in contact with, you’re going to copy paste the URLs to these sections.
The reason you’re doing this is because it’s going to save you a ton of time later.
After a while of doing this you’ll have a huge amount people and organizations to contact. This is what you will do every day from now on. You’ll make it a seamless part of your daily routine to contact people for various reasons such as pitching, networking, and asking for advice.
At first you will feel uncomfortable contacting people. But don’t let that stop you. Let that be your motivation for doing it!
People are nicer than you might expect.
Rejection Means Try Again
Approach rejection the same way you would when a girls says “NO!” and giggles. Keep at it.
Ask politely if you can get feedback on why your pitch wasn’t accepted. If you do get some feedback, be grateful that the person took the time to answer. Never argue or get defensive.
Then ask if it would be ok for you to pitch them again. If they say yes, read the feedback you got carefully and follow it to the best of your ability.
By doing this consistently you’ll improve your success ratio compared to if you’d just taken a no and walked home with your tail between your legs
Even when your pitch is successful it can be a good idea to ask for feedback. Arnold Schwarzenegger did this every time after his bodybuilding shows – he always asked the judges for feedback. And well, the rest is history…
(This is also a good way of getting the other person to invest into the interaction.)
Persistence pays off.
So, is Your Content Good Enough or Not?
After having pitched your idea/service/product to enough people you should have gotten plenty of feedback just by seeing if people actually get back to you.
Regardless of what they say – so long as they respond – you‘ll understand whether or not you need to work on your ability to pitch via email.
If you keep getting rejected (but not ignored) that means your content needs work.
Before You Start Pitching, Keep This in Mind
Remember the two most important rules:
1. Make it as easy as possible for the other person to say “YES”. Resolve objections before they even arise.
2. Don’t waste people’s time.
Now you know how to craft an email pitch, use programs to your advantage, build a list, and deal with rejection in a productive way.
But there’s one more thing you need to know before you begin pitching. And it’s important.
When you start out you should first target smaller, less famous sites/people to build referrals and social proof.
You’re then going to use these as leverage for getting on the radar of the big dogs. The reason you need to do this is because they’re busy –and you need all the tricks you can find to spark their interest.
If you don’t have any leverage, chances are that you’ll either be ignored, or possibly laughed at.
Consider yourself informed.
Happy pitching hunting boys!
About the author: Ludvig Sunström runs Start Gaining Momentum where he writes about practical self-development and gives no-nonsense tips for becoming more efficient and stepping up in life. He is also the author of Breaking out of Homeostasis, a book about claiming more control over your life by overcoming the brain’s innate mechanism for staying the same. Feel free to connect with him on Twitter and Google+.








Great article Ludvig.
I’ve followed the 4 steps of email pitching recently, and I can say that they do work.
Also, “If you keep getting rejected (but not ignored) that means your content needs work.” - very good point.
Keep up the good work,
Oskar
Thank you Oskar.
Glad to hear that you agree.
I used to be a space rep. The most difficult publication to sell space on were church diaries,
I was one of 46 reps working for Graham Cumming.
I held the record for the most number of adds on a church diary. 52 all sold in one day in Dover.
Top reps were taken to a fancy restaurant for Christmas dinner.
At such an event I was asked for the secret of my success.
Believe it or not I was not a very good public speaker and just laughed it off.
I could not explain that when selling I was in a different zone and acting a part.
In Dover my quite earnest manner gave my customers the impression that I was a Vicar or was closely involved with church work.
This was not an intentional con, but in retrospect I was a con man. Something that I could not admit to the chairman of Graham Cumming.
I had lost everything in a bitter divorce in 1977.
I was without a job, home and was living in one room 8 by 6 and suffering from Crones disease.
In 1979 I met my new wife and life changed for the better.
I started work for Graham Cumming in 1979. I saved £3000 in the first year, and we married in 1982 and bought our first house together.
So, did I do wrong portraying myself as a church associate and rising from the bottom of the muddy trench to relaunch my life in a better direction.
Interesting story.. good on you for turning things around..
first
Hahaha no. Second. ;)
Great post Ludvig. I am taking a lot away from this.
Thanks Adam. Best of luck to you in your future pitches!
Great intro by Victor..! Laughed my ass off at “Yo u fat fuck!”.
And great post by Ludvig. Very hands-on. Loving the Ogilvy quotes dude.
Great pics also
Haha, I did too.
The quotes are both from Ogilvy’s book “Confessions of an Advertising Man”. Very short book. I really recommend you read it, if you haven’t already.
Great Post!
Thank you Sebastian!
Great post Ludvig! Feedback IS the breakfast for champions.
Edgar P.
Edgar,
Indeed. Gotta get as much of it as possible and learn through trial and error.
Ludvig,
I am reading your book and taking your advice. I now have a digital common place where I can write my notes and soon summarize your book for referencing. Thanks for giving great advice.
Vic,
Thank you too for the great advice you share to us go getters!
Edgar P.
Ok. Be sure to be consistent with it. These habits are very cumulative/scalable. You don’t see much difference in 1-2 weeks, but after 1+ month the difference starts getting noticeable.
Feel free to send me an email if you have any questions.
I am going to try the Alexa toolbar to see how popular other blogs are. Great tip. Thanks!
It saves a lot of time if you’re interested in guest posting or just online marketing in general. I will probably start using the paid version eventually.
Persistence….one of the single most powerful mindsets in business and in life. Making this a habit, an instinct, a way of life is so important. When I was a personal trainer I would always hear the same questions. “How to I lose weight?, how do I reach this goal?, how do I….fill in the blank…?” My answer would always be “persistence”. If you are not persistent then you will surely fail. In my world, failure is just an obstacle and it is a chance to learn. If you can learn to be persistent in the face of failure then you will find a way. It all depends on how bad you want something and if you are willing to be ferociously persistent in obtaining that something!
Great read!
Well spoken.
I think the main reason why the majority of people lack persistence is because they are addicted to instant gratification and don’t make it a conscious effort to practice their mental focus on a daily basis.
Awesome post, definitely gonna use this as a reference for the future.
yeah me too.
I thought your last post (benjamin franklin) was awesome and it has seriously changed how I interact with people but this post is also really great. I don’t need to “pitch” or contact a lot of people yet but I probably will eventually. You give some great tips for when i will do that. btw if you were to choose, which of the programs would you use in that case?
I am kind of lazy and don’t want to get all 4 of them now..
Lukas,
Which programs are most important depends on what you want to do… But generally speaking I would say OneNote/EverNote are indispensible for organizing information and writing. Those programs you should start using even if you aren’t going to pitch anyone.
PS: If you’re struggling with laziness there’s a good chance that you’re “stuck in homeostasis”. Reading my book might help. It’s free.
Nice Article Ludvig. Thanks for sharing and thank you Vic. I plan to implement the strategies discussed.
Thank you. Good luck!
I was not a fan of the idea of guest posting on this blog. However, they have all been awesome, and this one comes at a good time. Thanks for the ideas Ludvig.
Haha Chaki — all two guest posts. By me. :) Thanks for reading.
Lol.
Thanks for the guide Ludvig!
I am not going to be pitching other articles towards other blogs yet - I still have a good amount of work to do on my own website - but this will surely be an awesome resource to refer back to once I start.
Thanks, Balaclava Blogger.
I know the feeling. I procrastinated it a long time.
Just don’t wait forever to do it. It’s a process that takes some time getting into at first. I didn’t like it much at first — but now I think it’s awesome.
It’s a rather good way of getting exposure, plus it’s great practice. You also meet a lot of cool people and learn things from them.
And remember, it doesn’t have to befor your blog. You could use this as a private person too.
Nice post and some interesting points to take away from this, Very useful. I hope Victor knows his emails are going to double now. ;)
Haha. Yes they will. But hopefully they won’t say “Hey fuckface” etc…
When Vic did his New Year’s post and mentioned me in it, I got a lot of messages about how to pitch him.
I must admit, that did get me pondering about what your pitch was to him.
You guys have really upped my game as a blogger. I realise how much more I need to learn. Keep up the good work.
Well actually the “Yo Fat FUCK!” guy achieved something tremendous. He made it to B&D. But probably not in the way he desired
My email inbox already overfloweth. Make it easy to say yes and I’ll be happy with more emails.
Ludvig,
Hahah, I submitted a guest post to that same site around the same time and got a March slot. I see how it’s done now. You’re killing it! I’m definitely looking up to you as someone I can learn from and model.
Another awesome post.
Derek,
This is interesting to hear. Let me know when that post comes out, I’d love to read it.
Ludvig,
Another great guest-post. I’ll use what I need from this to improve my own site. Congrats on another great article!
Thank you Mack.
If you have any other questions you can shoot me an email.
Am I the only one who gets too excited to read further after reading half of ludvig’s posts? :/
No. I do too.
Hej från Sverige Ludvig,
It is remarkable how what you say applies to communication in all areas. Even in the world of science, where I mostly live, knowing how to pitch is important. We are in constant need of the brains of other people to achieve our goals and knowing how to ask is more than half way around. Keep up the good work.
Tjena BM!
I hear you. I have an older (much older) friend with a company that specializes in teaching IT people to do pitches, present their ideas, and become comfortable with public speaking. He says the same thing.
Great article. I want to say thanks to Vic and Ludvig. Firstly to Vic for always answering my emails, and also introducing me to Ludvig! Secondly to Ludvig because I really like your blog!
I do IF for 36 hours per week now and it’s much easier than I imagined it would be! Plus I don’t feel it affects my stamina in the work-out before breaking the fast. I feel like a mean, lean, iron pumping machine!
I also get a lot of such “requests” from people, and I often reply with “no, and next time you ask someone, sell it to them!”.
The mistake they make is they only think about what THEY want, so they say “hey I have this product, I want you to sell it and make me lots of money, my product is awesome blah blah blah…”
I feel like I have to spend 30 seconds to educate them. I did this on an internet marketing forum (the biggest… but not best one) last week. It’s shocking how people don’t think about how their message may be perceived!
@Ludvig, just some feedback if you Google “breaking homeostasis” the first result comes back with your book and the formatting looks off, everything is to the right. Why not send that traffic to your homepage?
Mikey,
Great comment. I’m happy to hear that things are going well with the fasting.
Please see your inbox, I sent you an email.
Gentleman, don’t forget about the PageRank Status extension for Chromium browsers. Also, for note keeping and a digital commonplace, consider trying the Any.do and Workflowy extensions, they’re pretty great. Cheers.
*Gentlemen
Thank for the suggestions Alex!
Hey Ludvig,
I was wondering what blogs you recommend for professional blogging and fitness(weightlifting)?
Very insightful article, by the way. Thanks for the post!
John
Hello John,
Thank you.
I don’t read blogs (or books) about fitness anymore. That stuff is second nature to me by now — I’ve tried pretty much everything (diet, exercises, tricks) and boiled it down to a few things that work really well for me.
As for blogs… I occasionally read on Copyblogger and Problogger. But not often at all. I am very careful to avoid getting into a state of “information overload”, so I just take a few actionable tips and apply them ASAP to see if it works or not. If it works I keep it up. If I have doubts or questions I ask blogger friends or Google for the info.
Hey Ludvig;
Is “10 Reasons Why You Should/Shouldn’t Shave Your Balls” a good title for an article?
Excellent post btw.
MistahD
MistahBigD,
Yes. It’s actually ranked by the Super Mega Blog Committee as one of the best possible titles that an article can have.
Great post Ludvig, I’ve been waiting for this.
Thanks Sebastian.
Apply this and let me know how it works out for you!
stellar article man. i write good copy, but this did give me a lot to think about.
thanks ludvig and vic
Thanks for reading anon1 — glad you got some value out of it.
Good stuff, and well presented. Kudos.
Thank you dr.
What I would add to pitching in any situationare two things:
1.Speak as if each word is worth a thousand golden coins making you stick to the basics and give function to each word
2. ALWAYS start with the question, create a reverse pyramid
PS: almost pissed my pants reading the
how-not-to-pitch’ email HAHA
Derek,
Your suggestions seem smart, but I’m not sure I understand. Could you provide an example on each one?
In this example you want to start a dropshipping business selling products from a local warehouse. You keep it concise and to the point and start with the most important message - similar to journalists do when writing a news article.
Let’s say you mail the gatekeeper for this meeting that will take place;
Dear Mr Green,
The reason I am sending this email is because I would like to schedule lunch with you to discussing whether it would be possible to sell some of your products.
—>after that elaborate on why/what/who/how etc.
Best examples are always found in journalism. You always start with the most important message and each word has a function in each sentence - creating order in chaos.
You will never find a newspaper article discussing a frenzy shooting that doesn’t start out something like this:
“Ten people were shot man in a shopping mall in Byrone St.”
They always starty with the ‘must -know’ - and then the follow it up with details.
Thanks for expanding on that Derrek. I get it now — and I agree with you.
Have you read the book “Made to Stick” by any chance?
Great article Ludvig.
Thanks aZr!
I’m most thankful for the section on networking, building a contact list, and the little glimpse into your system. “Tried x times, no response. [date] try again in 2 weeks.”
Hey Justin,
Building the list saves a ton of time and confusion. Because if you have a list you can just follow it, and that reduces the risk of “losing focus” and getting distracted from the goal. And when you have a goal in mind you’re guaranteed to feel like a badass.
Thanks for the feedback. I’ll remember that.
After reading this post the day it was posted I implemented some of the advice on offer here. I’m amazed at what a difference it’s made to my pitches. More people are saying yes and I’m progressing in terms of becoming a pro blogger.
Ludvig, is there any way we could collaborate on my Alpha Male Makeover site?
Glad to hear it Adam.
I don’t have that much time on my hands right now. But send me an email and let me know what you have in mind and we’ll take it from there.
Ludvig,
Awesome Article. It was insightful and very well laid out.
Ludvig, why didn’t I read this post two years ago, when I ruined my chances of posting a guest post on Nerd Fitness!
I basically failed to adjust to the situation and at the end of my guest post, I made a blatant pitch for my email signup sales letter. I did this even though I knew that Steve (the owner of the website), didn’t like pushy sales tactics (I followed a tip from a wannabe blogger and it backfired on me good).
Here’s what the owner said to me:
“That is quite the extensive post my friend - I think it’s full of information and will surely find a good home out there, I just don’t think it’s a good fit for Nerd Fitness at this point. Also, i was kind of turned off at the out-of-the-blue advertisement for your email list at the end of the article, kind of rubbed me the wrong way.”
The main takeaway for me in this post is to adjust your approach to the situation :)
Great article my friend, can’t wait for the next ones.
Cheers,
Dejan
Thanks for the kind words Dejan.
Haha. I recently pitched Nerd Fitness myself. Steve replied back to me within an hour and said he that he like the initiative, but that he only accepted posts from close friends.
Maybe in the future…
Vic,
Why do you so highly recommend WordPress over competing blog hosts, e.g. BlogSpot? I’m starting to get decent traffic relative to the content I’ve put up and effort I’ve put in so far (now starting to get per day what i was getting per fortnight at the start), and if I have to make a change, I’d rather do it now than start from scratch in the future.
Thankyou in advance.
Blogspot is fine for amateurs.